your structure in this poem is very weak, would have been more impressive if you incorperated a pantoum, sonnet,villanelle or a heroic couplett. or make it a haiku! and monkey's cant run distance change the last line to logan is time-wulf a keening for runner!
Can monkeys run distance?
ReplyDeleteyour structure in this poem is very weak, would have been more impressive if you incorperated a pantoum, sonnet,villanelle or a heroic couplett.
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and monkey's cant run distance
change the last line to logan is time-wulf a keening for runner!
wow i didnt even notice someone posted this on my blog haha and i i am a monkey then they must be able to run distance
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